I wish the book was a little more clear about when these stories were written. The first ones felt a little rough. I found them a little cloying, until I tried reading them in Miranda July’s voice in my head. That helped a lot, but it wasn’t until “Making Love in 2003″ that one of the stories really stood on its own for me. The insertion of Madeleine L’Engle into the story is a little odd, but that story was probably the one that worked the best for me.